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My mom and my dog by asahikawa-arashi My mom and my dog by asahikawa-arashi
One more homework for my composition classes^^
My dog's name is Kuroi (黑), in Japanese it means Black. A few years ago I've read one yaoi manga, main character was a dog, who sometimes became hot bishie. So I decided to give my dog the same name :DD But he doesn't have the same skill (to become handsome bishie), what I pity D:
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I would like to say that this is quite impressive work. Despite being an observational drawing, it clearly captures your own style. The composition is surprisingly effective as your mother and your dog balances each other out. Also notable is that they form a kind of hexagonal shape when seen together as a whole, which makes up stable composition. I know that pen is very difficult medium, but you seem to use it effectively. Most inexperienced artists tend to be a little messy when using pen, but your draftsmanship is amazing.

Ah, but alas, I must point out one thing, for without some negative criticism, this will surely not be constructive at all. Just one criticism on the perspective; at first glance it is hard to distinguish the value between your dog and your mother's clothes, especially on the left side of your dog; consider making your mother's left sleeve a little darker as well as your dog's left front leg to further distinguish the two subjects.

Other then that, it is lovingly crafted artwork with strong style and very well balanced composition.
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westernman Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
Really GREAT work!
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costage Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uau!!! Great job.
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dances-with-hipsters Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
I really like your black and white drawings. The lines are really distinct and exciting. Great job!
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Babeyoca Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe!XD
Very well done, I like it so much!:la:
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Dearuu Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
Beautiful! X> You use ink so well!! The hatching looks wonderful! *7*
(..first time me seeing your non-manga art. X>)
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Kodomina Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This so beautiful !! The expression look awesome :la:
Great work :"D
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jouston Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
wow this is so cool!
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cuzzycutegirl Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
did you use ink?? or pencil? or charcoal??

nice work!
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Ink)))
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cuzzycutegirl Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ow! wow
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