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My mom and my dog by asahikawa-arashi My mom and my dog by asahikawa-arashi
One more homework for my composition classes^^
My dog's name is Kuroi (黑), in Japanese it means Black. A few years ago I've read one yaoi manga, main character was a dog, who sometimes became hot bishie. So I decided to give my dog the same name :DD But he doesn't have the same skill (to become handsome bishie), what I pity D:
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I would like to say that this is quite impressive work. Despite being an observational drawing, it clearly captures your own style. The composition is surprisingly effective as your mother and your dog balances each other out. Also notable is that they form a kind of hexagonal shape when seen together as a whole, which makes up stable composition. I know that pen is very difficult medium, but you seem to use it effectively. Most inexperienced artists tend to be a little messy when using pen, but your draftsmanship is amazing.

Ah, but alas, I must point out one thing, for without some negative criticism, this will surely not be constructive at all. Just one criticism on the perspective; at first glance it is hard to distinguish the value between your dog and your mother's clothes, especially on the left side of your dog; consider making your mother's left sleeve a little darker as well as your dog's left front leg to further distinguish the two subjects.

Other then that, it is lovingly crafted artwork with strong style and very well balanced composition.
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westernman Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
Really GREAT work!
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costage Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uau!!! Great job.
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dances-with-hipsters Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
I really like your black and white drawings. The lines are really distinct and exciting. Great job!
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Babeyoca Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe!XD
Very well done, I like it so much!:la:
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Dearuu Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
Beautiful! X> You use ink so well!! The hatching looks wonderful! *7*
(..first time me seeing your non-manga art. X>)
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Kodomina Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This so beautiful !! The expression look awesome :la:
Great work :"D
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jouston Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
wow this is so cool!
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cuzzycutegirl Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
did you use ink?? or pencil? or charcoal??

nice work!
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Ink)))
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cuzzycutegirl Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ow! wow
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Prehanh Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
Nice effects and shading:o awesome
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :hug:
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Writer
Very impressive!
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:tighthug:
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Writer
^^
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Brownez-Koekoez Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very good drawing >,<d
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
^////^
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HopeSwings777 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
Fine work! Kudos!
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:iconasahikawa-arashi:
asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :love:
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HopeSwings777 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
You're welcome!
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Akira9669 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ahhh amazing!!!!
so much detail!!!!! ^^
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you ^//////^
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Akira9669 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome!! ^^
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miketheartist Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Nice work! Just got a GS puppy a couple weeks ago, so really like this. Hope he grows that big too lol!
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Feed he good, and have a lot of walk with him :3
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miketheartist Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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Veruxka009 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Professional General Artist
AMAZING! When i do realist art is my fav media is a black pen:D
I think that is what you used right?
Love hte mom and dog!
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Almost))) It's a pen and Chinese ink)))
Thank you :hug:
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Veruxka009 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Professional General Artist
Whoa!Tha's sooooo hard to work with!!! OMG!
Exclent work!!!:D
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World-Inside-Me Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
This is so detailed and everything looks perfect! The shading and use of lines is stunning and I love how it all fits together on the page. You've done the faces superbly too and the clothes are so realistic as well!
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :hug: It's a big pleasure to read your comments :DDDD
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World-Inside-Me Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
No problem! =D :tighthug:
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LynxKitteh Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
Wow, that's some awesome artwork :)
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :hug: :love:
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LynxKitteh Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
Yw :meow:
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psycho-neko-chan Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Writer
I own that manga~! It's a good one. <3

This is really well done. I love ink drawings, especially when the cross hatching and hatching look so good.

Mine never comes out right. -_-

<3
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :hug:
I really love pen and ink :3
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MARoy Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that gorgeous the detail on yer mom and the dog is amazing, let me guess he's a german shepard right
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asahikawa-arashi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, you're right, he is)))
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